Narrative Writing | The long girls hair.

One cloudy sunny day, a girl named hari.. She was in year 10.. She was mostly homeschooled because she would get bullied at school for having the most notty and possessed hair..

 

Her mother would get disgusted of her hair, even when she had to watch her daughter eat her food well her hair was bushy and messy.

 

Hari’s father left when Hari’s mother couldn’t pay her debt for child support, he didn’t want nothing to do with Hari and Hari’s moms life.

 

It was a black hole awaiting in hari’s head, haunting her thoughts now and again, her mother thought she was just having a dramatic turn because of her hair..

 

One Day on a rainy but sunny day, at 7:30 friday september Hari decided to go to school.. Her teacher she hasn’t seen in 3 months was oddly surprise.

 

Hari’s bullies known as, Sarah and Claud had an attach to bullying Hari its like they were obsessed with her hair..

Until the strike happen..

 

Sarah pulled Hari’s hair with the grip of her hand and pulled so hard that it startled Hari with tears, but no one knew.. No one suspected.. No one cared.. No one thought but…

There was something in hari’s here, im not talking about nits.. Im talking about a possessive animal or demon.. Nobody could name it.. Nobody could move, but everybody screamed.

 

The doors were closed, the windows were crashed.. They couldn’t jump out because it was a 100 feet building plus they were on floor 3..  No way! They weren’t gonna jump out..

 

Their faces were terrified until the possessive animal or demon introduced themselves as Hairy hider larry, Haha! I know what an hilarious name but its a serious moment right now lets get back to the story.

 

Hari was lying on the floor with no energy which performed Larry’s desire, revenge.. Sarah begged for forgiveness but Larry replied.. ALL OF US HAVE SELFISH NEEDS AND MINE IS GETTING REVENGE.

 

Hari woke up, she could not hear anything.. The teacher Miss Aston Was shaking Hari with begging and tears.

 

Hari explained to Larry it was her fault not taking care of her own hair, she was lazy and stubborn to take care of it. It was not their fault for bullying me because of my hair.

 

Leave them alone! Please. I beg you.. She fainted..  The time went by as in larry left her hair with the struggle cost of her bullies not getting a punishment of what they behaved. 

 

Hari woke up with an shock, hari’s mother rushed into the nurse room and said.. Its over now.

 

Now remember kids remember to always keep your hygiene and self aware healthy and clean, or there will be consequences for the future and mental health!.

 

    

Author: Tearoa Luka

 

Narrative: Tearoa Luka

Producer :  Tearoa Luka

Editor: Tearoa Luka

Artist: Tearoa Luka

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