Narrative Writing | The long girls hair.

One cloudy sunny day, a girl named hari.. She was in year 10.. She was mostly homeschooled because she would get bullied at school for having the most notty and possessed hair..

 

Her mother would get disgusted of her hair, even when she had to watch her daughter eat her food well her hair was bushy and messy.

 

Hari’s father left when Hari’s mother couldn’t pay her debt for child support, he didn’t want nothing to do with Hari and Hari’s moms life.

 

It was a black hole awaiting in hari’s head, haunting her thoughts now and again, her mother thought she was just having a dramatic turn because of her hair..

 

One Day on a rainy but sunny day, at 7:30 friday september Hari decided to go to school.. Her teacher she hasn’t seen in 3 months was oddly surprise.

 

Hari’s bullies known as, Sarah and Claud had an attach to bullying Hari its like they were obsessed with her hair..

Until the strike happen..

 

Sarah pulled Hari’s hair with the grip of her hand and pulled so hard that it startled Hari with tears, but no one knew.. No one suspected.. No one cared.. No one thought but…

There was something in hari’s here, im not talking about nits.. Im talking about a possessive animal or demon.. Nobody could name it.. Nobody could move, but everybody screamed.

 

The doors were closed, the windows were crashed.. They couldn’t jump out because it was a 100 feet building plus they were on floor 3..  No way! They weren’t gonna jump out..

 

Their faces were terrified until the possessive animal or demon introduced themselves as Hairy hider larry, Haha! I know what an hilarious name but its a serious moment right now lets get back to the story.

 

Hari was lying on the floor with no energy which performed Larry’s desire, revenge.. Sarah begged for forgiveness but Larry replied.. ALL OF US HAVE SELFISH NEEDS AND MINE IS GETTING REVENGE.

 

Hari woke up, she could not hear anything.. The teacher Miss Aston Was shaking Hari with begging and tears.

 

Hari explained to Larry it was her fault not taking care of her own hair, she was lazy and stubborn to take care of it. It was not their fault for bullying me because of my hair.

 

Leave them alone! Please. I beg you.. She fainted..  The time went by as in larry left her hair with the struggle cost of her bullies not getting a punishment of what they behaved. 

 

Hari woke up with an shock, hari’s mother rushed into the nurse room and said.. Its over now.

 

Now remember kids remember to always keep your hygiene and self aware healthy and clean, or there will be consequences for the future and mental health!.

 

    

Author: Tearoa Luka

 

Narrative: Tearoa Luka

Producer :  Tearoa Luka

Editor: Tearoa Luka

Artist: Tearoa Luka

Writing Adjectives & Verbs | 2023

A girl… Named Octavia was a 12 year old girl…  who never stepped foot out of the house. She didn’t know what a town was? Or what stones could do to her feet!

 

She was homeschooled, Exactly.. Her mum was the principal, teacher, student and janitor,

But though there was a gossip in her head to step out the door.. Whenever she went to bed she’d dream of a grassy spot with a picnic under a tree with a calm joyful bright sun tackling us with the shine it had.

 

She would Laugh in her sleep, with a tear in her eye enjoying the dreams of the thoughts cheerful and amazing.. But even if it made her happy and thoughtful it still didn’t stop the fact she was locked out from the world..  She brushes her hair every single hour for a time for her to go out..

 

She had that chance to go out, her mother had enough of her with a single regret in her eyes.      But will octavia  regret it… or… will she enjoy it. 

 

The end.

 

 

 

We had to discover 10 Adjectives and Verbs… Though it took work.. it was still a fun and difficult Time for me, Leave a positive comment on my blog!

Writing of “I Hear a Whisper”

I heard a whisper but no-one was there…   “Hi! I’m Annie. I’ve been hearing whispers.. But- nobody was there. My 3 friend’s were concerned. Lan, Peter & Dasi.”  Annie Said, Lan Said..  “It all took place in the carnival esutria, In florida.” (Lan: 12 Boy  Peter:11 Boy  Dasi:11 Girl  Annie:12 Girl ) . Annie Would always visit the carnival esutria every 2 saturdays .  Dasi Asked.   “Why Do you always visit this carnival.. Its older than the statue of liberty” Annie looked at dasi with a glare in her eye.  Peter stared at them both “Stop Gossiping about the carnival.. We all know that this carnival means more to annie.”

 

. The Three of them looked at peter, With an Sad expression on there faces like they were disappointed.. Annie looked a little pale but  she  lightened up .  

“ Your right, Peter.. Maybe Its some kind of ancestor “ Annie Said-

. Peter Looked at Annie with pride . Lan Asked. “What does it whisper anyway?” . Annie looked at them & Replied . “Glass To Ash”  & the story begins..

 

. Annie Ran Through the Carnival Trying to cover her ears well the others were following carefully . Lan Gossiped “Bro this carnival be crusty as, look at the sky its so cloudy, this feels like a horror movie” . Peter Slapped Lan’s Head. “Cut it out guys!” Dasi Said. . They All Went into a glass Reflection Game . Peter said. “This is where every horror movie person dies!” Annie Replied “Were not going to die. Just look down & follow the path just keep close.”

 

Annie Rubbed her eyes well walking & Turned around.. She saw nobody.. She yelled out “Guy’s Where are you?!” She Saw a black void & a old lady was standing by repeating “ Glass To Ash” . Annie’s Eyes Widen up, She was so stunned to talk . Annie Finally Spoke “W-Who Are you?” . The old Lady Replied . “Your.. Great Grandmother” . Annie stared . “why do you whisper in my ear?” she asked- Her great grandmother replied “R-Rebuild”. 

 

. Annie Saw the door running forward to it but saw a poster saying . (Welcome to the Carnival of esutria ! New Opening !) . Annie Knew what to do . 2 years later “Woah Lan your mother is good at running things.” Annie said”- . Lan Smiled . (The Three of them smiled well looking at the view of the carnival.)

 

The End

Author: Tearoa Luka

Narrator: Tearoa Luka

Characters: Annie (Main)

                      Lan (Second)

                      Dasi (Third)

                      Peter (Fourth)

           Great grandmother (Side  

              & Whisper)