Writing of “I Hear a Whisper”

I heard a whisper but no-one was there…   “Hi! I’m Annie. I’ve been hearing whispers.. But- nobody was there. My 3 friend’s were concerned. Lan, Peter & Dasi.”  Annie Said, Lan Said..  “It all took place in the carnival esutria, In florida.” (Lan: 12 Boy  Peter:11 Boy  Dasi:11 Girl  Annie:12 Girl ) . Annie Would always visit the carnival esutria every 2 saturdays .  Dasi Asked.   “Why Do you always visit this carnival.. Its older than the statue of liberty” Annie looked at dasi with a glare in her eye.  Peter stared at them both “Stop Gossiping about the carnival.. We all know that this carnival means more to annie.”

 

. The Three of them looked at peter, With an Sad expression on there faces like they were disappointed.. Annie looked a little pale but  she  lightened up .  

“ Your right, Peter.. Maybe Its some kind of ancestor “ Annie Said-

. Peter Looked at Annie with pride . Lan Asked. “What does it whisper anyway?” . Annie looked at them & Replied . “Glass To Ash”  & the story begins..

 

. Annie Ran Through the Carnival Trying to cover her ears well the others were following carefully . Lan Gossiped “Bro this carnival be crusty as, look at the sky its so cloudy, this feels like a horror movie” . Peter Slapped Lan’s Head. “Cut it out guys!” Dasi Said. . They All Went into a glass Reflection Game . Peter said. “This is where every horror movie person dies!” Annie Replied “Were not going to die. Just look down & follow the path just keep close.”

 

Annie Rubbed her eyes well walking & Turned around.. She saw nobody.. She yelled out “Guy’s Where are you?!” She Saw a black void & a old lady was standing by repeating “ Glass To Ash” . Annie’s Eyes Widen up, She was so stunned to talk . Annie Finally Spoke “W-Who Are you?” . The old Lady Replied . “Your.. Great Grandmother” . Annie stared . “why do you whisper in my ear?” she asked- Her great grandmother replied “R-Rebuild”. 

 

. Annie Saw the door running forward to it but saw a poster saying . (Welcome to the Carnival of esutria ! New Opening !) . Annie Knew what to do . 2 years later “Woah Lan your mother is good at running things.” Annie said”- . Lan Smiled . (The Three of them smiled well looking at the view of the carnival.)

 

The End

Author: Tearoa Luka

Narrator: Tearoa Luka

Characters: Annie (Main)

                      Lan (Second)

                      Dasi (Third)

                      Peter (Fourth)

           Great grandmother (Side  

              & Whisper)

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